First stanza lasr line should be mine
Besides that detail awh it almost made me cry 5/5

Beautifully written. reminds me almost of the book/movie A walk to remember.
this brought a tear to my eye. Well written! keep it up!!!!!!!

100/100 by the way

Omg! I really enjoyed reading every line of this poem i luv it soo much pain but with happiness.:)

Beautiful. Lovely Write!!!