by Jump from Life Apr 25, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Waking up from an endless dream |
I cried I know what it feels to loose a daughter it is a pain more painful than anything it will not leave you till you die maybe even then it won't leave, you made me cry by 75% of the poem it's that powerful and it hurts to read but it happens good job 5/5 |
Thank you, and I'm glad I was able to invoke emotion from my readers. |
by Shadow
Its remarkably sad...truely heart felt. My heart was literally pounding as I read, with my own child on the way I can't imagine the pain. A painful truth that no one accepts. |
by Trinity Heart
Power and beautiful and sadly this happens every day and people STILL are surprised smh its tragic 5/5 |