Touch

by Jyoti Rawat   Apr 25, 2014


Grass is flying with air as like your hairs,
Oh my dear
You are not here but your sweetness is every where.
Closeness of air is like you are here,and I am always here because for me you are every where.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Yatubeera Resty

    Most definatly this is a clear version... well put and clear to read.
    love it

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Oh..so very sweet and touching. Love is felt deep inside each line...nicely penned!

    • 10 years ago

      by Jyoti Rawat

      Thanx Meena you always appreciate my work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Yatubeera Resty

    My dear, i must confess your work is eye catching. it kept me reading for awhile so as to understand what your implying alto i must confess, i find your poem confusing.
    but i love it

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    Beautiful romance..
    I like the flow of this poem

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