Beautiful romance..
I like the flow of this poem

My dear, i must confess your work is eye catching. it kept me reading for awhile so as to understand what your implying alto i must confess, i find your poem confusing.
but i love it

Oh..so very sweet and touching. Love is felt deep inside each line...nicely penned!

Most definatly this is a clear version... well put and clear to read.
love it