Nice to see another one from you. A more in depth comment a little later. You took a plant that we here in the US consider a "weed" and made it a "star flower", good work.

I like the way you have portrayed a wild flower with feelings and giving it a character. Making a world out of it. The emotions in this runs deeper and it touches the reader.

I love this piece, i thought that your word choice and flow was great and the tempo of the poem was also excellent! i really like how you have taken the dandelion.....a flower i love and made it the focus of your write, dandelions are so understated and easy to look past but here you have really highlighted it :)) Great Job!!

I'm back again....lol....i can't stop reading ths poem, just mesmerizing!!