by Beautiful Soul
Karla there is always such beauty and sadness in each of your poems. Here I saw the love you had for this person. I think here you are saying that this love made you so much stronger and "hid" you inside his heart. Which tells me this love was truly mutual and real. There seems to be a lot of emotions in this as well. The love and happiness you had together. The sadness of loss it seems and the anger of life taking your love so soon. You can really feel and hit the reader hard. Nowadays you are lost in this world and more sad. Lovely write!! |
by Ole Carsten
Lovely poem, but if there is nothing inside and nothing out, I must say you fill the space between with pure magical words |
by Meena Krish
There is a mix of emotion here, one that starts with a smile and ends with anger. Yet the passion is still visible. It has a tone of sadness as well as strength..take care. |