Comments : You are all to him (Kyrielle)

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Meena, this kyrielle is filled with beautiful sentiments.

    May your son, reach his dreams. Though I'm sure he will, with determination and hardwork but also with the support and the love you have for him as well as with faith.

    I don't have any critiques. Every line has the 8 syllables but also the refrains sound smoothly. It sounds like a prayer.

    Well done. I'm glad you are back to writing.

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Meena,-
    Can you change the category in this poem,? The friendship section has a glitch. So the voting button does not work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    That's why mother is a god,
    my best wishes for your son.
    well written meena

  • 10 years ago

    by Larry Malbrue Jr

    Wonderful sentiment