by Amezzy Kelly May 22, 2014
category :
Life, society /
about society
Sometimes I wonder |
by Em
Great write.. We are all wonderers. |
by Eithne
The last line cleared it all. We all wonder that yes. But could use different phrase instead of "sometimes I wonder" every time. But the substance is perfect! |
by Eithne
The last line cleared it all. We all wonder that yes. But could use different phrase instead of "sometimes I wonder" every time. But the substance is perfect! |
by Eithne
The last line cleared it all. We all wonder that yes. But could use different phrase instead of "sometimes I wonder" every time. But the substance is perfect! |
by Dragon Boy
There was much repetition! try and use your creativity. |
by Amezzy Kelly
Thanks for your critique, I will work on that!!! |
by Amezzy Kelly
Thanks for your critique, I will work on that!!! |
by Amezzy Kelly
Thanks for your critique, I will work on that!!! |