Comments : Selective Amnesia (Reversed Etheree)

  • 10 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    You will never remember and I will
    never forget, the reason behind
    the treason you dared justify
    as an action of regret.

    What a powerful poem in a whole, but what a amazingly strong stanza here above. The force and emotion gathered around the words here are just seeping throughout each line, my goodness!

    Pity the man you deem
    yourself to be when
    you can't stand up
    and defend
    me; your
    love!

    Strong, vivid, emotional! The emotional force again is just powerful, the hurt that you are feeling toward this person is so meaningful explained in the poem. You are disgusted in how your love cannot defend you, how you have to defend yourself, how you had to actually express your anguish and anger in this poem.

    You can seriously feel your hurt in this poem, and I got to say for it being a short one it is truly a powerful piece. One of the most emotional writes I have ever read.