by RDJ8113 May 29, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I made a promise that I'd never touch that razor. |
by John Doe
I'm sorry but I just feel that your idea isn't conveyed properly but I love your concept |
by BlueJay
I like the message, the purpose, the heart written between these lines. i love how you really put yourself out there with this piece. however, the repetition is way too much for such a short simple piece. |
by Ole Carsten
You are into something, but repeating to much, a small friendly advice find more words for your lines and replace promises |