Comments : Surrender my Smile

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Sadness,

    the sadness is felt in this poem. And reading through it, I wonder if a smile is truly an indication of happiness or if we just like to believe it or if there are other ways to express it without a smile. Take Care.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    ~ Deeply sad poem and very expressive. Only the memory keeps things together and ended with the yearning to see again that lost loveone. Thank you for sharing.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sylvia

    It is really sad Meena. You can almost see the smile disappearing. Can feel the heaviness of the pain and see the image of a person holding that scraf. The images and emotions are strong and your words make them real.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmm Sad poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by DarkLight

    I walk in your sadness, and it covers me with every word used to express it.