Comments : If I

  • 10 years ago

    by sham pulok

    Ok...

  • 10 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I didn't quite get what the message was supposed to be . But how I took it was you want people to accept you for who you are and be there for you and if they don't try then they shouldn't act like they care when you die . Sorry if I'm wrong but there should probably be more to the poem so the reader could get more into your head.

  • 10 years ago

    by Euphanasia

    Simple and elegant. Good write

    • 10 years ago

      by xxOutcastQueenxx

      Thanks and that's the message I wanted people to get