I have few words for this Luce, but it's another piece by you that moves me and stays in my memory. There's something soothing and relaxing about this piece. Almost like a meditation (which I've think I've said before a few of your poems are reflective?).... the repetition of "let it flow" is like a mantra, something we repeat and the more we repeat it, we realize we can be at peace with ourselves. It reminds me that we can rid ourselves of all past worry and any anguish. We can breathe anew and realize that the blood will flow on as will our life. I like the ending lines as well; I see your voice in this as guiding this person to remain calm, not seek the end, and not harm themselves (in any way). |