You are the queen of nature poetry! This piece was really intensely captivating even in it's short length. This just...wow, I love the idea of dawn protecting you, like the new day gives you hope.

Love the ending too...so much depth and imagery.

Love this...
xxx

I agree to you being the queen of nature poetry. I love this piece and how it can be taken in so many different ways and how your words were strong enough to convey a story but yet ambiguous enough to relate to a multitude of scenes. Great write and beautiful use of imagery.