Such a great sense of dread in this poem.

Ah! This one! This one I like very much! The vast vocabulary used to form very vivid pictures is absolutely well-done!

The big picture -- the imagery and the play you forced into my head -- is indeed dreadful; intense; and most of all exciting!

But the first stanza... I could speak for hours about it, because in my opinion it made a good poem great. Trying to explain this sensation of experiencing that stanza in particular for the first time would be impossible. It's... Brilliant. Simply brilliant.

Great write! I'm looking forward to seeing whereto your potential and talent will lead you.

Wow! This is really good. I love your descriptive and knowing the subject matter it's hard to digest. Glad to know fellow survivors. Take care.