by Meena Krish
Sounds like a little trip down memory lane for the love birds...another nice read Sylvia :) |
by BlueJay
The imagery in this piece is well done and the style is smooth and very simple. Well done. I really like this read :) |
by Mohan
May be sometime memories is painful but its always beautiful. |
by Baby Rainbow
Lovely little story - it shows how you hold onto that memory when we lie awake, it is funny where our mind can lead us sometimes. I lik ehow this poem can be related to any relationship, past or present, there is no real hint at loss or anything as such, just that memory of how they used to be, but at the same time no really strong feelings that imply it is no longer that way anymore. |
by Maple Tree
I love and adore this song! So as I read this pretty poem by Sylvia, I couldn't help but smile. What a pretty poem she has crafted here. |