Sylvia, this rictameter sounds like it belongs to a greeting card. I like it.

I agree with Lucero it sounds nice and heart warming to be in a greeting card!

This is beautiful, it actually doesn't feel like a formed poem when you are reading it, the flow is very good and I didn't see any words being forced. It went together very well and left me with a little smile on my face. I agree with Everlasting - this could be a little poem inside a greeting card.

Well done