Flower O Flower

Nicely Penned!!!

This piece is beautiful and you used repetition to your advantage, but i have to say that the flow really wasnt that easy to follow. otherwise great piece.

Beautiful poem.
I think the beauty of flowers is Nature's painting.
nothing is soft more than a flower.

Flowers are not only beautiful they attract so many things big and small. I like the feel of this poem as well as the simplicity..good one.

Flowers are beautiful. I like the "flower o flower" repetition. Though I felt like I wanted to read more about what you were telling to the flowers. Overall I like it. There a few grammar issues but they can be fix.

Take me to your closer? <-- this is how it's in your poem.

Did you mean? "Take me to you closer?"