by Everlasting
Flowers are beautiful. I like the "flower o flower" repetition. Though I felt like I wanted to read more about what you were telling to the flowers. Overall I like it. There a few grammar issues but they can be fix. |
by Meena Krish
Flowers are not only beautiful they attract so many things big and small. I like the feel of this poem as well as the simplicity..good one. |
by Mohan
Beautiful poem. |
by Jyoti Rawat
Thanx |
by BlueJay
This piece is beautiful and you used repetition to your advantage, but i have to say that the flow really wasnt that easy to follow. otherwise great piece. |
Nicely Penned!!! |