On His Step

This topic is another unique one. the wording is fantastic as well because you picked something that is insignificant. Such as a rock. I also again believe this is another God or religion based poem. I think you are looking at yourself and how God see's you. We all have such a short time here on earth. Okay. The wording Herr is simple but tells a greatstory. It really does make you think about life here. But I think you should give yourself more credit. We as humans are all unique in our own way. And we are all special in our own way.

This holds another great ending as well. "He" whom I assume is God. I think Christians will all go to heaven. But just be a good person and it will be okay. Lovely message overall.

This can be seen in different ways. My conclusion is that even a small insignificant thing is important in life and even that has its time to go and stop as planned by God.

I will make you day even more. The first thought I had was this is about several things, how God might treat us and how humans do treat us. This is one write that gives the reader an insight into how someone that might be down and out feels, like they don't count, that they are kicked around by God and us "humans". Nice work and keep doing pieces like this. Makes the reader think.