Interesting...

This piece really leaves a person thinking, especially with the way you worded the final line. The style is interesting and gives each line a little more personality than they might have otherwise. I think that there is both sadness as you talk about life with distance and deception but also hope as you mention more to life actually occurring in death. no one can confirm nor deny that hence the birth of hope. A very interesting piece in its short length but its overwhelming truth.