I enjoy how this poem flowed

I feel I can relate to this. Eventually after an incident I attempted to cut myself off from all emotion so that I wouldn't have to deal with its effects. Some emotions worked, but still others remained.

I like the way the poem is formatted, four lines with three ending in commas and the last a period. Well done!

Omg I love this poem. Okay first of all the way you worded this. Each stanza holds a unique and different perspective and then carries well into the next creating a very good story. And the pauses between each line is great I feel because it gives the reader a chance to think about the line and move on from there and become more interested.

I really like how this poem is directed toward a certain group of people or in general the world. We all have our own battles. I think here though you are talking about the battle of depression and suicide and how one thing can make us slide down fast. The thing that stood out to me most was using "we", instead of " I". As I said earlier that makes me think you wrote this for everyone who suffers. We may bleed a lot (suffer) but if we stand together we will never break. The message is we are survivors. Excellent poem!

Well written!

To every deed, there's a purpose. What brings us pain, makes us stronger.

Loved it!

An excellent poem.loved it.

This is fabulous and so true. It shows that we are all strong no matter what we go through well most of us are. You wrote it so well.