True life is all about trails and errors, falling may hurt when it occurs, but the getting up is what allows us to go on and that what really matters. Facing our problems is what makes us stronger and only courage will help us to do that.

Very strong piece....AL

I like how you show that you have power here . your strength is incredible in this poem. I love this first paragraph , really deep.

I like the way that it flowed and the way that you embrace your darkness I know that sounds weird but I've lived in my own darkness for a while and I just love the emotion and the flow here a very nice piece 5/5

-Bet