by ryan woollard Jun 10, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Girl i know what i did wasn't right i was so wrong for so long, we never even had the chance to have our own song, hurting you was my biggest mistake |
by Britt Bratt
Awesome e |
by BlueJay
There are pieces of this poem that feel quite cliche but you used them in a pretty nice way so they don't detract from the heart and effort that you have worked so hard to create within this write. well written. |
Thanks I very much appreciate your advice |