Comments : A gorgeous day for a lovely smile .

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I could picture you writing this as you speak of your love. Words just pour and when love is beautiful everything around you is beautiful.

    Maybe some comas and line breaks in between stanzas will make the read even more lovely...take care.

    • 10 years ago

      by raymond sawyer

      For one so gorgeous and yet has a smile like the morning sun thus your heart has been touch with true love