Luce. I love this poem a lot. Its so simplistic yet the message and imagery is fantastic. I loved that you put this in the nature category as well. I think you pinpointed exactly how people while lying in tall grass. It can make you feel uncomfortable at times. I truly loved the wording you used as well. Being in grass makes me feel like it is summer time and I can see the sweat and the sun on your face pushing the mower. I don't really think this has a metaphor at all. And it doesn't need to I don't think.

I think the message if the poem is if you want to feel rewarded you have to do hard work and this is a perfect example. You wanted to lie in the grass but it was too tall so you fixed the problem by mowing. And after that you can lay in the shade and relax. Wonderful and simple!!