by Meena Krish
Love does and makes people do crazy things and it will take you along deep into its arms. You sure do have a way of expressing your feelings and at the same time drawing images for the reader to see. |
by Jad
I like the metaphor you used here to describe how you feel about this person. It had a lot of pleasant imagery, but, at the same time, it seems there is a serious side to all of this as you are trying to discover why you can't stop thinking about about this one person even though you have so much happening in your life. Your emotions are clear and easily felt in your stanzas. The poem flowed well and started powerful in its first stanza and ended in the same tone. |
by Augastus Black
Absolutely stunning poem this is.....I sank more deeper then the pacific ocean....while reading this write. |