by lillie Jun 17, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
My fingers were trembling, and I couldn't stop my heart from racing so much. What was wrong with me! Why did I just agree to this? Everything around me felt blurry, and there was no sound being injected into my ears. I saw his mouth moving, his tears rolling down his face as I re- read his lips over and over again in my head. |
by LoneWolf
I like this narrative poem. You've shown compassion to someone who doesn't deserve it despite his actions. This poem places you in the situation and I love how it lets you image the happening. |