by Maple Tree
I can't say enough.. You pegged the acrostic! Just breathtaking and the message is just WOW! |
by Kakera
Thank you, Andrea! Acrostics turned out to be really fun, I will probably play around with them in the future as well, trying to form more complex ones with time. They actually end up working really good with my natural style of unformed writing, flowing completely on its own without having to stop and think about it. Hope that's how other formed styles will end up with time. It also ended up being a perfect release for my hatred of syllable counting now as well, LOL. <3 |
by Maple Tree
Ugh, doubled the comment lol |
Goosebumps,a smile of understanding, heart skipped several beats and the tears ran down my eyes, had to run to the loo to get some tissue to dry my eyes.that's how intensely this poem affected me!!!I have no words, I'm still absorbing the intensity of my reaction to this poem, I'll comment when I'm in a better frame of emotional wellbeing. |