Nature's Love

by Mohan   Jun 23, 2014


In the yellow evening,
a sandalwood fragrance in the air,
like the crawling baby
so too the clouds caress the flowers;
The flowers become wet
with the kiss of clouds
and drown shyly.

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  • 10 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    The poem is beautifully soaked with nature's love.Nice write.5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The poem has turned out nicely. I still feel that a line is missing...perhaps its the way I'm reading it. But all in all a nice write :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmmmmm

    Wawo poem, after reading this I can smell sandalwood fragrance.

    The flowers become wet
    with the kiss of clouds
    and drown shyly.

    This section is also awesome.

    Superb job

  • 10 years ago

    by Blood of a Lion

    I like it, its kinda like a little wisp of sugar on your fingertip. Great job 5 out 15 carrots.

  • 10 years ago

    by JesusFreakAuthor

    Awwwwww this is so beautiful, i am so jealous of how well you write, wonderful poem, im gladi read it :)

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