Awwwwww this is so beautiful, i am so jealous of how well you write, wonderful poem, im gladi read it :)

I like it, its kinda like a little wisp of sugar on your fingertip. Great job 5 out 15 carrots.

Hmmmmmmmmmm

Wawo poem, after reading this I can smell sandalwood fragrance.

The flowers become wet
with the kiss of clouds
and drown shyly.

This section is also awesome.

Superb job

The poem has turned out nicely. I still feel that a line is missing...perhaps its the way I'm reading it. But all in all a nice write :)

The poem is beautifully soaked with nature's love.Nice write.5/5