Comments : Dear Society

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmmmmmmm

    What I should sayyyyyyyy

    About women yes they do makeup because they mend by god as like this.
    Girls looks rocking in makeup...........
    deep dark lipstick ooooooooooooo awesome

    I would say regular of cosmetics feeding their skin, regular use makeup kit make your face/body as habitual as u can't assume your self without it.

    For girls looking good is very important and correct makeup and correct dressing helps lot.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmmmmmmm

    What I should sayyyyyyyy

    About women yes they do makeup because they mend by god as like this.
    Girls looks rocking in makeup...........
    deep dark lipstick ooooooooooooo awesome

    I would say regular of cosmetics feeding their skin, regular use makeup kit make your face/body as habitual as u can't assume your self without it.

    For girls looking good is very important and correct makeup and correct dressing helps lot.

  • 10 years ago

    by Blood of a Lion

    I thought I wrote long stuff xD haha, its different I'll give you that. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Darren

    Judges comments

    As I started reading this I thought 'slam poem' it is nice to see them on here as they are quite rare and when written well they are very powerful. This though started off as a slam poem and then morphed into a regular free verse poem. I loved the detail throughout and I actually thought it was a nice twist on the slam poem as the paced was naturally slowed by the end. 4 points.