Very beautiful! 5\5

I like the mixture of nature and romance. This poem has soothing tone to it with nice imagery :)

Lucero made me want to go live at the beach! This nature poem is very unique and truly melted my heart this week! I could feel a touch of sadness and longing in this poem and that added to the creativity of this poem for me.
I felt a romantic elegance within this poem, possibly used metaphorically or perhaps a hint of underlying messages. Either way I was mesmerized by the word usage and display. Very pretty nature poem by Everlasting!