by Masked metaphor Jun 26, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Sticky, slimy phlegm, cobweb my airways, |
by LittleMsPink
Is it bad that this kinda made me laugh a little? 0.0 |
by Lune de ma vie
A striking piece! You really described the illness infecting your body in such detail. The words that you used to piece together this poem were such a heavy-duty dose of realism, you really explains all of the insanity that goes on when one is sick in a really artistic way. I loved how you put it together in a way that it's a battle, a war or something along those lines. Great job as always. |