A striking piece! You really described the illness infecting your body in such detail. The words that you used to piece together this poem were such a heavy-duty dose of realism, you really explains all of the insanity that goes on when one is sick in a really artistic way. I loved how you put it together in a way that it's a battle, a war or something along those lines. Great job as always.

Is it bad that this kinda made me laugh a little? 0.0
Anyways... my mind is a mess cx
And.. this is really well written
I enjoyed reading it. 5