by uttAm Jun 26, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
You are the prettiest girl i have ever been, |
What a lovely sentiment throughout the poem, your love for this woman is unquestionable in your words, the depth of emotion is captivating , as joker queen stated, there's a few matters of grammar issues, but all in all it's a very pretty piece :-) |
by Lune de ma vie
Lovely poems that pours out the love and emotions which you feel for this person. |
It's beautiful and cute also it needs a few grammar here and there not to mention capitilatzation but other than that it's really is adorable my dear 4/5 |