Comments : This Fear...

  • 20 years ago

    by nikki

    that was amazing, i loved it, that was really really great!!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    Great words, loved how the rhyming went, like not being regular...it made it seem more as just a train of thought...great effect. and you will find that guy, and he will be more than you ever expected!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Bryce Ellner

    Beautiful poem, I really liked it. You put alot of feeling into it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dawn Manna

    thank you for your critique. i wrote this poem the way i wanted to write it. i dont feel that i need to rewrite it. i wrote it so the readers would be able to relate because i know alot of people have felt this way. but thank you for the comments

    dawn