This is such a deep and powerful poem, it flows really well and does not stumble from one place to another, the tone remains deep from start to finish, longing for peace, which never seems to find you. The despair and tiredness of the this pain that seems to be your shadow, is evident in the words, and you took the reader on this journey with you, to show them exactly what a day in the life of yourself may be like.

The connection I feel between the poet and the words in the poem were very strong, very heartfelt and personal.

Good work.