You...

hey man that is pretty harsh and i know how u feel.... to have something in front of you and you cant have it.... it sucks

This poem is nice, short and sweet...LiL One

i really like this poem, although it is rather short, but the straight-to-the-point style of it and the simplicity of the wording was nicely used to define your feelings and portrayed them well, and as sean said i loved the repitition of the word you, you used it really effectively

A little too simple to be called as a poem. IF you would have added a little more.. it would have been nicer.

This is a pretty simple poem, but I thought its simplicity definitely added to the poem as a whole. I liked the repitition of "you", and how the poem ended with "too," which rhymes :-). Nice work.