Comments : You...

  • 20 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    This is a pretty simple poem, but I thought its simplicity definitely added to the poem as a whole. I liked the repitition of "you", and how the poem ended with "too," which rhymes :-). Nice work.

  • A little too simple to be called as a poem. IF you would have added a little more.. it would have been nicer.

  • 20 years ago

    by nikki

    i really like this poem, although it is rather short, but the straight-to-the-point style of it and the simplicity of the wording was nicely used to define your feelings and portrayed them well, and as sean said i loved the repitition of the word you, you used it really effectively

  • 20 years ago

    by LiL One

    This poem is nice, short and sweet...LiL One

  • 20 years ago

    by Million Tears

    hey man that is pretty harsh and i know how u feel.... to have something in front of you and you cant have it.... it sucks