Comments : Boys I Fell In Love With

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like the style of poem you have picked here, the conversation between 2 people, and how it is the opposite. Really good idea, and you have pulled it off well.

    There could be a little bit more detail in the poem, maybe a bit more description of the emotions behind your words etc, but the layout and wording that you have is a great start.

    I enjoyed this

    • 10 years ago

      by Maria

      Thank you very, very much for your insight.