I actually really enjoyed the words inside this poem, I think they are quite positive and uplifting, like you are reminding yourself of the good things, and what to hold on for.

I do suggest you edit the poem a bit, in the form of its layout, spread it out a bit more so that people can be attracted to it more. You will get more readers I would think.

Also, it would make it easier for you to add in some better punctuation for the reader, so that they know when to break your thoughts up.

nice words.