Comments : Half way to happiness

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, this poem really does show one end of the scale to the other. So many people will relate to that happiness and sadness part affecting their writing, I especially can understand this because I seem to write sad and depressing work, and when I feel happy, I don't feel the need to write. you have described this so well.

    Please consider playing about with your layouts, I worry that your work will go unnoticed, and it definitely is worthy of reading.

    • 10 years ago

      by Mylie

      Im glad that you understand my feelings on being able to write when im upset or angry. I find it very hard to write anything but sad poetry and when im happy too I don't feel the need to write. Its crazy that a lot of others feel that way too, my ex was a musician and wrote songs that is why I mentioned I gave him the gift of a song.

      Yes im taking your advice and edited all my new poems :) thank you for your advice, I appreciate it very much