A short narrative packed with action and emotions!
It felt like I was running along with the child and
the imagery just springs forth with pain and breath
taking emotions.
What makes this write even better are the eye
catching lines for instance:
Bushes quivering to barks,
as footsteps splash fear into walls,
His shirt soaked with adrenaline
All for the sake of sprinting
the long walk to freedom.
Excellent piece of work here and wish I could give out more points!!