I know many people struggle to write a comment or even read poetry relating to self harm, however, I have been there and know what it is like to go through.

I think your wording in this poem is not cliche as these poems can be, I think you added in so much detail and description and even included metaphors and great adjectives. Some imagery was quite vivid, but then self harm is vivid, as is the pain and depression behind it.

I remember these feelings well, and I like how you ended the poem by teaching out to all of those who refuse to see what is right in front of their eyes.

Strong.. Vivid.. Expressing in a most powerful way. Truly this was a heart wrenching poem as I was able to feel you throughout it and the pain an suffering you have had to go through. You did a fantastic job in portraying and expressing a hard subject and situation.. Left me lingering in thought and gave me chills with each stanza I read as the end truly captured a sense of what many don't ever realize. 5/5