Comments : What Am I?

  • 10 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I really enjoyed reading this because it explains what you are, what your situation is, and what you will be in the future also I liked the last line since you gave off things that you will be yet you end with what you are 5/5

    -Bet

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Angel symbolise goodness. A person who has transcended earth and is now working with God. To be broken is an effective way of expressing of struggling with life someway.
    It's clear you have a good heart and like do many, just need validation.
    Keep writing and leave comments on as many other recent poems as you can. I'm pretty sure you'll get some feedback. Not everyone returns a comment for a comment, but many do.
    Good luck, Skyler.