Lily, Rapture Goddess, Of Enchantment... (A Sonnet)

by Robert Gardiner   Jul 15, 2014


Lily, Rapture Goddess, Of Enchantment... (A Sonnet)

Lily, Rapture Goddess, Of Enchantment.
Spelled, I Am, By The Magic You Possess.
By Your Splendor, I'm Left, In Amazement.
Fascinated, So, My Every Recess.

Delighted, I Am, Enamored, Ever So.
Exhilarating Is, Your Every Pore.
Just The Thought, Of You, Leaves Me, Wanting, More.
Nothing, Like The Ecstasy, You Bestow.

Rhapsody, Upon Me, Each Time, You Bring.
You Sing To Me, In Such A, Sweet, Refrain.
The Presence, Of You, A Most Haunting Thing.
Amidst, The Whistling Wind, I Hear, Your Name.

Overjoyed, I Am, By Your Every Hue,
Charmed, Enthralled, Infatuated, By You...

Rhyme Scheme: ABAB CDDC EFEF GG

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love

As Always, Your Comments & Votes Greatly Appreciated, Thanks You.

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  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Aw this is definitely beautiful. <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Full on rhymed poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by mazzy star

    Omg! It's so beautiful. It should win weekly contest.

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its nice to read your poems after some time now and this Sonnet has been penned beautifully. I like the smooth flowing and the rhymes fitted nicely in each line...lovely read!

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Bravo for the amazing effort on this tricky form, you have pulled it off amazingly, and I always feel the sonnet is one poem I can never manage myself. You have made this look so easy. I do enjoy how it is not flowing sentences as such, but rather broken up segments. It feels more vivid and creative this way, like it hold a lot more.

    Well done, you done a great job.

    • 10 years ago

      by Robert Gardiner

      Thanks Baby Rainbow

      Just corrected the six line, It ended "Every hue" should have ended "Every Pore", so I changed it.