Comments : Lily, Rapture Goddess, Of Enchantment... (A Sonnet)

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Bravo for the amazing effort on this tricky form, you have pulled it off amazingly, and I always feel the sonnet is one poem I can never manage myself. You have made this look so easy. I do enjoy how it is not flowing sentences as such, but rather broken up segments. It feels more vivid and creative this way, like it hold a lot more.

    Well done, you done a great job.

    • 10 years ago

      by Robert Gardiner

      Thanks Baby Rainbow

      Just corrected the six line, It ended "Every hue" should have ended "Every Pore", so I changed it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its nice to read your poems after some time now and this Sonnet has been penned beautifully. I like the smooth flowing and the rhymes fitted nicely in each line...lovely read!

  • 10 years ago

    by mazzy star

    Omg! It's so beautiful. It should win weekly contest.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Full on rhymed poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Aw this is definitely beautiful. <3