Nicely Penned, Flowed Smoothly!!!

I liked the way that both the last words of every stanza rhymed also like Robert the poem flowed very nicely 5/5

-Bet

Thoughts can seem like nightmares when they capture our mind everyday. Short poems are hard to write because they have to be powerful to make a message. I like here how you have a set location or part of day. Its easier to picture. Night time was great to use here. To me thoughts always seem worse at night because of the factor of everything is calm and you have time. The second stanza is interesting. Rabbits are very soft and gentle creature. I like the comparison. The point is strong. Your memories are the headlights and even though you want to look away. You can't. Great write. 5/5