21 days to freedom

by Darren   Jul 15, 2014


**resubmitted and edited

Two numbers that can change a memory.
A human brain needs time to change,
like the cycle of the moon
or sand falling through glass,
we require twenty-one days.

A cigarette burns like a beacon,
it removes doubt and muddles your mind,
it strokes your inner thoughts and whispers,
Oh so gently into your ear,
this life is just a little drag.

That shot glass fits finger and thumb,
like picking up a part that has fallen off.
It's sweet innards carry us away from here,
to a reality that needs no coping,
a place where we are equal
even in our daughters eyes.

A change of attitude turns slowly,
the meek bloom from extinguished self doubt,
a feel of real worth bathes their fears
washing them away forever,
a new man, a new start.

Twenty-one days later
the cigarette is cancer on a stick
the shot glass is a bullet in your hand,
A brain can be reprogrammed.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    You never cease to amaze me at all. Your cigarette line is classic and life being a drag is very true. But comparing it to a cigarette. That made me awe struck. The way we cope is different from each other. You made it seem like everything is "cool". Like the " cool" kids at a high school but in the end all they do is harm more than help. Sure short term it may seem like a good idea but after life goes on you get weaker.

    The progression of each stanza is stunning. Each one holds their own story that all comes together. The intro is set up nicely to go with that ending. Its very hard to change anything we go through. Because when addiction strikes it takes control. The message of this poem is great. It really does radiate hope. Now for that ending. I love how you turned it around to show everyone that coping in negative ways can destroy you. Great story and message.